Tuesday, February 9, 2010

TUESDAY MORNING WRITING-It's Too Beautiful For Murder!

The brochure of of the fishing village of Burano, Italy looked so inviting..


Tomorrow is Tuesday Morning Writing, so I've chosen the above photo to write a story about.  But what kind of story.  My title suggests a murder mystery, but a love plot could also be written.  A woman going on her first overseas vacation, chooses to go to Burano and meets a handsome rugged looking man.  Or even a story told of a village girl who lives there, helping her father on a fishing boat.  What kind of life she lives, a secret crush of a village boy. Even a story of a widow who becomes the grandmother of the village.

Sunday I posted about Elizabeth's list from Mystery Writing is Murder.  If I use her guidelines, I think I can file the above characters under "Ideas for upcoming characters", or even "Character descriptions", and even "setting descriptions".  This is where I run into problems, choices! I guess it comes down to my own breakdown of how I would file, associate and remember.

I love mysteries, so I think I'm going to go with the location being in Burano, Italy.  A woman travels there for a vacation, or a month of rest, rest from what? What kind of work does she do? Since Burano isn't really a tourist village, and people usually travel there mostly for day trips, where will she stay?
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Ally Lombardi leaned her head back against the headrest, closing her eyes and listening to the hum of the airplane.  She was so tired.  The rushing to close her apartment for three months, making sure everything was taken care of.  Writing down the instructions for Henry, the apartment building manager.  Being reassured by him that he would bring her mail in daily, that no one would be allowed into her apartment.  She really wasn't concerned about Henry.  She knew he was dependable.  He had been there for fifteen years.          ( I will pick up here tomorrow and continue with the story) 

Sunday, February 7, 2010

A DIFFERENT FOCUS

Up, Up to touch the face of God..

Among the clouds

As I stated in my January 17th post, I have decided to take up the writing gauntlet.  I'm going to focus on putting together my writings and try to have them or something published this year.  One of the first projects is to print off the stories I've written, at my daughters suggestion, to see if I can intertwine them into a story or if I can take one story and expand into a book, etc.  

My next step is to read the many wonderful writing blogs that offer support and information on such subjects as getting published or many other topics.  One thing I learned from Elizabeth Spann Craig, over at Mystery Writing Is Murder, this week is about when you're not inspired to write is to make a list.  Actually, it's more than a list, it's a list with pages.  Such as Characters, Ideas for upcoming characters, Food ideas, that's right, have you ever really given thought to a meal your character is about to sit down to or a party to meet other characters in the book? Do you want it to be Southern, or fast food? BBQ or sophisticated? How about Character and setting descriptions? Short sniping snippet (not sure what this one is) or clues and red herrings even subplots.  One thing I'm learning, writing, while it can be fun, is a lot of work.

So I'm off to do another list item, research, which is narrowing down what story to expand or just start from scratch.

Friday, January 29, 2010

LBC-The Perfect Life

The Loose Bloggers Consortium, is an informal group of bloggers who post on a given topic each Friday. One topic is posted, then each member gives it their individual treatment. The current members are, in aphabetical order:
 ANU, (ASHOK is on hiatus), , CONRAD, GAELIKAA, GINGERGRANNYMAR , (HELEN, is on hiatus), MAGPIE11, MARIA, (MARIANNA is on hiatus ) and RUMMUSER .


This weeks topic is "The Perfect Life"


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As a youth, the favorite television programs of the time were sitcom's such as "Father Knows Best", "Leave It To Beaver", "The Donna Reed Show", "Bonanza", and of course "The Andy Griffith Show."  I enjoyed watching these shows.  I don't remember ever thinking I wish I could be in those families, basically, they showed how most families lived.  Oh, I don't mean everyone had the houses or all moms wore high heels to do the housework, (actually, I didn't know of any mom  that wore heels to work around the house, can you imagine how uncomfortable that would be), but that courtesy, manners, how brothers and sisters behaved mattered.  Even in the sitcoms, there were struggles, sibling rivalry, and a few crises arose.  So while the sitcoms exaggerated, they also presented a life that most people were familiar with. A family could sit down and watch the show together, laugh and cry with the characters.  I think one thought that came out of the shows were that there isn't a perfect life.  No matter where you live or how many parents you have or don't have, nor the money could give a person a perfect life.

Frankly, I think a perfect live would be boring.  I heard someone say one time, in response to a comment about how this person wished his life was like a straight line, that life is up and down, the only way life is a straight line is if you're dead.  

Of course, out of the above sitcoms, if I had a choice of which life I'd like to have it would be Bonanza or Andy Griffith.  Why, because they reached outside the immediate family to show how life affected others.  Both had a family with a single parent and a sense of humor.


Tuesday, January 26, 2010

TMW-Why The Two Of Them, cont'd, Part 2


The lake is where they spent their vacation every year..
The first part of Why the Two Of Them? can be found here


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The voice of her receptionist reminding her that it was three o'clock brought Randi back to the present. After shutting down her computer, she pulled out her purse, locked her laptop into her briefcase and headed out the door.  As she pulled onto the fifty-nine north interstate, Randi realized there were a lot of people heading out of town. Reaching over she turned on her favorite Carley Simon cd's, listening to music as she drove along.  She hoped her mother would be ready and in a good mood when she got to her house.  Lately, her mom appeared ready to jump out of her skin at the least provocation. She had lost a lot of weight and aged ten years since Randi's father, Jamison, had died.

Leaving the city behind, Randi could feel herself relax.  This was one of her favorite drives. By the time they reached the lake, in the past anyway, she would have left all of her frustrations and worries at the outer limits of Birmingham.  It is such a scenic route, a straight shoot north, with farms, trees and quiet. Exiting onto ramp 141, she turned left onto Deerfoot, then left onto Old Springville Road. Her mom lived in the older section of Trussville. When she pulled into the driveway, her mom was sitting on the shaded front veranda, waiting.  Placing the car in park, she pressed the trunk lid release.  Before she could open her door, her mom was already coming down the sidewalk.

"Mom, let me have your suitcase, I'll put it in the trunk." Her mother handed it to her and went on around the car to the passenger side, getting in. Before getting back in the car, Randi glanced in at her mother who was sitting stiffly with her back pressed against the seat and her lips in a thin line.

"What's the matter, Mom?"

"You're fifteen minutes late.  If you were going to be late, you should have called me.  That way I could have called your Aunt Vera to come and pick me up."

"Mom, the traffic slowed me down, you know how it can be on a Friday afternoon.  We'll make it up once we pass Ashland."

They drove in silence, which was fine with Randi, as she wanted to go over in her mind what she wanted to discuss with Sheriff Matthews tomorrow.  She had decided to drive to his office and ask to view all they had on her Dad's and Tana's death.  It was time to either solve the case or file it away.  Hopefully, it would be solved, otherwise, the not knowing would just about drive her crazy.

Randi looked over at her Mom, who seemed to have relaxed some. She wanted to ask her questions about whether the Sheriff had told her anything about what they had discovered.  She hesitated after her Mom's behavior at the house. She decided to just wait and discuss it with the Sheriff tomorrow. She'd not met him before, only had talked with him over the phone.

It was a quiet evening, her mom was still in odd behavior, and didn't want to talk.  She claimed she had a headache and went off to bed early.  Randi was sitting on the deck, listening to the night sounds. The tree frogs, the soft breeze whispering through the pines, bringing along the scent of honeysuckles and pine.  Out here, she could look up into the sky, and without the city lights, see millions of stars. Occasionally, one would appear to twinkle.  The sound of a car's tires crunching the gravel as it drove up the road broke into the peaceful night.  When it passed under one of the lights, she realized it was the Sheriff's car. After he turned off the motor, he must have been on his cell phone, she could hear the clinking of the metal as it cooled off. Finally, he opened his door and stepped out. She really couldn't see his face at first, but once he stood, she realized he was a tall man, one who kept in shape.

Suddenly, a deep voice boomed out, "Miss Grayson, you have a few minutes to talk?"

"Sure, come on up, you want a cup of coffee?"

"That would be nice."

While he climbed up on the veranda, Randi went inside and placed cups, cream, sugar and coffee on a tray.  When she came back out, he was sitting in one of the rocking chairs, smoking a pipe. She loved the smell of the tobacco he was using. A faint cherry smell.

"I hope you don't mind me smoking, it's the way I unwind in the evenings."

"No, I love the smell of pipe tobacco.  It reminds me of my Granddad Grayson.  He would smoke a pipe.  I loved the smell it left on his clothes." She poured the coffee into cups and offered him cream and sugar. "What's on your mind Sheriff?"

"Miss Grayson, how's your mother? Does she seem alright since your dad died? Does she talk about what happened to you?"

"No, Sheriff, as a matter of fact, she doesn't.  She's become extremely edgy, she's loosing weight, she's gotten forgetful and fearful. Why?"

"There's no easy way to say this, all the evidence points to your mother killing your father as well as your cousin, Tana."

"What! There's no way! They loved each other, mother would never kill dad!"

"Normally, I would agree with you, Miss Grayson, but"

"Call me Randi!"

"What, oh, okay, Randi, are you aware your mother is being treated for schizophrenia?"

Randi sat there stunned, she shook her head no, "How, when did this all start?"

"According to her doctor, she began to exhibit the symptoms about six months before your father died.  Your father came in and talked with him two weeks before he died."

Randi began to shiver, "Why did dad want to talk with him?"

The Sheriff stood up and walked over to the swing, he pulled the afghan from the seat and wrapped it around Randi's shoulders., "It seems you mom had stopped taking her medicine. She began accusing your dad of having affairs and fearing he was going to divorce her, " he poured her a cup of hot coffee, spooning sugar and stirring it up, "drink this to keep you from shaking."

She took the cup and drank the coffee, "Dad has never had an affair, nor would he even consider it."

"It doesn't have to be true for your mom to believe it.  Your dad confided to the doctor that she was following him.  She would suddenly appear at a restaurant or on the sidewalk, just staring at him."

Randi murmured, "That explains the tensing of his body when I suddenly walked up on him. He was afraid of her. But why kill Tana, she was his niece for Pete's sake!"

"I don't think she intended to kill her.  From what your Aunt Vera said, Tana, had just gotten off the phone with her boyfriend.  They'd had an argument.  I think Tana went down to her boat to think.  She was probably lying there asleep, having dozed off.  Your mom killed her thinking she might wake up and see her."

Randi pulled the afghan closer, "What's going to happen to her?"

"We'll arrest her, then admit her to the psychiatric ward at Medical Center East.  Once she's been evaluated, we'll know how to proceed. My deputy and the doctor are waiting in his car for me to call them up.  We'll wait for them to arrive before we wake her."

As he pulled out his cell phone and called them, Randi stood there numb and unsure of what to do next.  She couldn't believe what he'd said, and yet, the signs were there.

A young woman dressed in a police uniform got out on the driver's side, while an older burley man got out on the passenger side.

He walked up the steps and held out his hand, "Miss Grayson, Charles Burton, your mother's doctor. Where is she?"

"She's asleep in her bedroom.  Follow me and I'll show you. Will she be okay, she won't try to hurt herself or anyone else, will she?"

Dr. Burton replied, "I don't think so, but I have a shot ready to give her if she becomes violent.  We'll go in first and talk with her."

She stood outside and waited.  The only voices she heard were the doctor's and the Sheriff's.  The door opened just enough for the Sheriff to step out.  He took her by the arm and led her into the livingroom. In his hand he had a paper, "Randi, your mom killed herself and left you this letter.  It's confusing, one minute she asks for your forgiveness, the next she feels that there are people trying to hurt her. I'm sorry."

Randi kept her head down, "I'm not sorry", she thought. It means the poison she'd placed in her mother's coffee at dinner had worked, in the nick of time.  She had gotten quite a scare when the Sheriff's car had driven up. Now, it was all she could do to keep from smiling and giving away her secret.   Instead, she looked up at the Sheriff, "Thank you Sheriff, now what do I do next?"

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    Tuesday Morning Writings is a project sponsored by Gaelikaa and Judy Harper.  The words are copyright of Judy Harper.  Gaelikaa's story can be found here.   We have MelRoXx back, her story will be found here . Here is Anu's story and we want to welcome Sheeza, she has a good story Here

Sunday, January 24, 2010

TUESDAY MORNING WRITING-Pictures for 01/26/10

Below are pictures to write about this coming Tuesday. We would love to have you join our group.  Just right a story and send me a link before 8:00 AM CST, Alabama time, Tuesday, January 26.  It would be better to send me your blog link so that we can add it to our story before publishing as it's difficult to add after the story

is published.  In the meantime, if you can come up with a good sentence to go with the pictures below, just leave a comment!



She stood looking down into the cold water, so still...



The brochure of of the fishing village of Burano, Italy looked so inviting..


The lake is where they spent their vacation every year...

Pictures for this coming Tuesday Morning Writing.......01/26/10

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    Tuesday Morning Writings is a project sponsored by Gaelikaa and Judy Harper.  The words are copyright of Judy Harper.  Gaelikaa's story can be found here.   We have MelRoXx back, her story will be found here . Here is Anu's story and we want to welcome Sheeza, she has a good story Here

Friday, January 22, 2010

LBC-Doubts and Regrets

The Loose Bloggers Consortium, is an informal group of bloggers who post on a given topic each FridayOne topic is posted, then each member gives it their individual treatment. The current members are, in aphabetical order:
 ANU, ASHOK, CONRAD, GAELIKAA, GINGERGRANNYMAR , HELEN, MAGPIE11, MARIA, (MARIANNA is on hiatus and RUMMUSER .


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I don't know if I can cover all my doubt and regret in one sitting. One real regret I have, happened several years ago, back in my twenties. I came into contact with a woman, about my age,at that time. She was an acquaintance, someone I had met at a church social, once, and Sunday School a couple of times. The class passed out sheets with our telephone numbers. She called me several time, but we only talked once. She was a very troubled person. Not too long after meeting her, I felt I should call her, but I didn't. One of those calls I put off because of many reasons, but I just didn't know what to say or what she wanted from me. I finally did call only to find out she had committed suicide the day before. So, now when I have a mental intuition to call, go see or anything like that, I do it. I don't know if my calling would have made a difference or if it might have just put off what she finally did. I still wish I had called her.

I have had a headache the last few days that has finally developed into a migraine, so I doubt that I can focus on anything more profound to say, so with regret, I'll say goodnight all.



Wednesday, January 20, 2010

What About Copyrights?

Words & Images Copyright of Judy A. Harper 2009

Unless otherwise stated all images and words belong to me.
 Please do not use or take without my permission. A link to 
your blog or website is always appreciated and thank you 
for respecting my copyright.


I'm just beginning to learn about all that's needed to be a writer, be it a book, story or writing group.  Last week I was rushed and didn't have time to write a story for the Tuesday Morning writing group, so I copied and pasted one of the first stories I had written for another group.  Without thinking, I copied the picture as well, it was what prompted the story.  What I neglected to do was also post the bottom section of the story giving credit and copyright information on the picture.  It just didn't occur to me as some of the people weren't with the current writing group, therefore I didn't copy and paste.  But it's important to remember that I wouldn't want people copying words and information off my site without permission either.   That's why I have the above  copyright statement on my blog sidebar.  I know I need to do more research on this topic, but a rule of thumb is to keep in mind how much I value my pictures and words, therefore others probably feel the same.  So if you do belong to a group that allows you to use their pictures in your story, that if you use it again, be sure to post the ownership.  That your story is yours, but the picture isn't.

What are y'all's thoughts on this subject? Do you have additional information on copyrights?


My Grandmother Manila, 1920 (I own this picture)


One of my pictures used in a story "The Four Sisters"

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This is a borrowed picture from  Tell Me A Story Tuesdays project sponsored by Elizabeth Harper of Gifts of The Journey.  This picture is attached to the TMAST and a story I wrote
here (thanks Elizabeth for loaning me the above picture), you might want to check out the TMAST site for good stories written my me, Elizabeth and Gaelikaa...